My first Tuesday at Santa Clara University consisted of waking up way too early to attend an early morning business class and then driving home, thinking about how well I would do in said business class, and then driving back to campus to my first class of Critical Thinking and Writing. I’d never struggled with English classes and was just expecting the same format of reading the typical “classic” literatures and writing papers that dissected themes of the works and what blue curtains meant as opposed to red ones. I had only checked Camino about ten minutes before I left the house for the first class and was surprised to see that I was in a course called “Food Porn” and that one of the assignments would be to photograph food and create my own food porn. At that point, I drove over feeling both confused and excited for what I thought was going to be a very different type of English course, and it definitely was.
Still a Meat-Eater
Most of the first quarter of the course focused on the food industry and all of the shady, horrific, and bloody practices that go on behind the scenes. I will be honest, I was disgusted by it and wished that all of the papers the class wrote that detailed different aspects that were tainted had a noticeable effect besides educating each of us about the industry. The first essay I wrote essentially delivered the message that nothing in the meat industry can change, and people are responsible for it because very few of them care enough. I talked about how I was a staunch meat-eater and that I was disgusted by what I was reading and seeing during the course, but that I knew I would not change. I had to take a statement from Jonathan Safran Foer’s book Eating Animals, a statement that I completely supported, and say that it meant nothing to me: “Unsurprisingly, most people are quite aware of animal suffering in the meat industry, “Virtually everyone agrees that animals can suffer in ways that matter…” (Foer 73).
What happens in the meat industry seemed to get more and more brutal as the quarter moved on, and for my third essay I tackled the emotions of people toward the food industry. I discussed PETA, vegetarianism, and veganism. Let me note here that in my first essay I said this about veganism and vegetarianism in my first essay, “The idiocy of veganism and vegetarianism does not stop at the elitist viewpoint, it has a negative effect on physical health.” One aspect of every essay project was to try a writing style experiment. This could be inserting subtitles, creating different types of paragraph breaks, or adding photos. I chose photos for my last essay of the first quarter and I included images of animal abuse in the meat industry.
After writing that those who eat meat have no empathy, I provided hope to meat-eaters, “Research suggests that the answer to this dilemma may be compassion training” (Cummins 11). At the end, I asked the reader if they had simply brushed past the images or if they took a good look at them and had a reaction. I could only judge my reactions and I realized that I do not have the willpower to make any change, even though I’m sickened by what I’m seeing. My own experiment and the freedom of creativity given during the writing process exposed just how little willpower I have to myself.
A Baby-Faced Liar
The second quarter of the course focused on the themes of lying and dishonesty. I consider myself a good liar, and I took this opportunity to sometimes talk about personal experiences I had never mentioned to anyone else before. I cannot honestly say what prompted me to write about said experiences in essays read by both my peers and my professor, perhaps some form of wanting to vent or at least write down things I was not comfortable with about myself. I turned my own dishonesty from high school into fuel for the second essay topic. My topic for the second essay focused on how schools want and encourage students to cheat. I found parallels between the dishonesty of schools and the dishonesty of students. There is so much pressure on students to do well and that pressure comes from parents. I also discussed the recent college admissions scandal and how parents did not trust the abilities of their children so they felt desperate enough to break the law to secure them a place at a university they could be proud of.
However, parents also feel a pressure to get the best for their child by securing them the best schools so that they can feel content and also for bragging rights. This essay also introduced conducting our own primary research, and I got mine through a survey I typed out and gave to people at my gym. There was one comment that stood out at that time and still stands out to me as I write this, ““College is great, but trade school is a totally legit option. It’s still respectable and there is really good money there.” I come from a household where college is seen as a necessity, so I, sadly, adopted that stigma as my own viewpoint.
The final essay of the second quarter upon me, I decided to discuss the form of dishonesty that is voter suppression. One aspect of this essay that was different was creating a narrative for the essay that furthered my case. My narrative for the essay discussed voter suppression during the 2018 gubernatorial election in Georgia. Alongside the narrative, I also focused on creating a strong opposition, one that I could still dismantle, but it was unlike my oppositions in previous essays where I had created them with intentional holes. I had to go to sources and people I did not agree with and give them an equal voice, “In fact, by the time of the election that Abrams lost three months ago, the state had 6,933,816 registered voters, the most in Georgia’s entire history” (Spakovsky).
I also had to spend much more time on research since this was a research-intensive subject. I looked into the voter registration process in Georgia, interviews with residents, two constitutional amendments, and the actions of the young adult leaders in my generation. I also found an experiment that compared the truth discerning abilities of young and old voters, “About a third of 18- to 49-year-olds (32%) correctly identified all five of the factual statements as factual, compared with two-in-ten among those ages 50 and older” (Gottfried). The themes of lying once again forced me to look at myself and how I lie, and the lying in one of the oldest and most important American systems in voting.
Does This Mean No More Essays?
After two quarters of this course, I am can definitely say I am a better writer. Conducting research, narrowing my arguments, and conducting my own primary research allowed me to put that much more of my own voice and style into my writings. Finding my own voice was something I had struggle with throughout all of my writings in high school and finally being given more creative license was refreshing.
Both quarters made me look at both my writing style and I, and I think that there will be permanent, positive impacts on both. I learned about my hypocritical tendencies and how I am aware of the issue that is the meat industry but don’t feel like making any change because it’s too much effort. I learned that I am a liar but at the same time I have morals. So, there were good and bad aspects to be discovered but I think Dan Ariely, author of The Honest Truth About Dishonesty, summarized the bad in the best way possible: “The good news is that we all have a moral compass. The bad news is that we can’t just assume that our consciences will effortlessly and continuously protect us” (Ariely).
Works Cited:
Ariely, Dan. “The (Honest) Truth About Dishonesty.” Harper Collins, 2012.
Foer, Safran Jonathan. “Eating Animals”. Little, Brown, and Company, Sep 2010.
Cummins, Denis. “Why Some People Seem to Lack Empathy?” Psychiatry Today. June 23, 2014.
Spakovsky, Hans A. von. “Stacey Abrams’ False Claims About Election Integrity.” The Heritage Foundation, Feb 11, 2019.